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by avari20

person Emily
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally loving it so far, you go Avari!!! need halp naming the kid?
person Jessica
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much! I haven't laughed this much in such a long time. I simply dore your ariting style and the way things flow in this fic. I have read a lot of different fics that were meant to be funny that just made me groan. This story had me giggling and snorting right up to the end (not that it's ended yet). I am eagerly looking forward to following this story through its development and conclusion.
Once again, many thanks for the laughs
J
person origy
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first review I'll have ever left for anyone, and I'm quite thrilled to leave a review on your story. I find it very entertaining and always check to see if you've updated. ::grins:: I can't wait to see the next installment!!!!
person lrnd
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fun story so far!!!
person firewall
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - Narcissa is a real character in this story and I like the way she works/gets even. Dear heavens, I hope they don't call the baby Ick...sounds like their genes would make a beauty though.

I'm really glad that you were able to update faster than you expected.
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it lov it love it! please please continue!!!! I'm begging!!!!
person mona
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i really like it update soon!
person jen
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it. love it love it. absolutly love it. great jobbb!!!
update
update update

person Midnight Assassination
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was excellently brilliant! You are a very good (understatment) writer! You exceed me ten times if not more! I await your next Chapter and I hope and pray that it may be rather soon! XD
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lmfao! Brilliant. Honestly, I've just gotten through re-reading and a truly smashing chapter it was.