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~lol~ that was great i cant wait in till your next chapter ....and moine you are not going to call you "baby" ick are you .. and how did ron mess up the spell ..please update soon .... keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel

please continue! i really haven't had this much fun reading a fanfiction in a very long time! this chapter was great and i can't wait for you to update it!

Ahaha, the ending was excellent! I love this story, and yes, I'm still bowing. Keep up the great work!

Although i love your fic and the updates of previous chapters only serves to improve it, i find it very tedious to have to read previous chapters countless times just so i can keep up with the story, wouldn't it be easier to perfect your chapters before posting?

quality is worth the wait.

however i really am enjoying your fic.

Keep it up.

(I am from england and i have never heard that 'gesture' you refer to in the last chapter refered to as 'the fork', funny though)

That was fantastic! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Ack! I love this story! Hope you'll update soon~! *Love the Future Parents Plan xD*

I like Ick is good. Glad you updated again another good chapter full of humour and i find it refreshing that hermione's the one thats freaking out not draco

cant wait for 7.

SOO frustrating. I had a lengthy review for you at then my computer crashed and ate it. Very well, I'll start again, though I apologize for it's shortness because it's rather late.
First I have to thank you for writing something so original, creative, funny and taking the time to put the html code in instead of substituting it with distracting ALL CAPS and astrix-astrix (*). FPP is by far one of the funniest fanfic's I've ever read in any fandom, and one of the most creative.
Draco and Ick are so cute. She's a Slytherin for sure.
I love how you portray Narcissa- like those television/cartoon mom's who cry over everything but she isn't trite in the least. She's manipulative but in a comical manner.
You change Hermione very much, her first part very much unlike the comical tone you keep consistant throughout FPP, but sad and brooding. You make her believable and we accept her very well. She's dark- one would think you were describing Draco they way you write her, but she's not hopeless.
I adore the tone in the second chapter and the way you write. Draco's frustration is amusing. He's not reedeemed in the classical sense, but he's proven himself.
I'll continue my review later, but please, please, please, update me when you post a new chapter.
You're a terrific writer with lots of talent. You've done a fantabulous job so far and I'm very eager to hear the rest of it.

This is hilarious! I can't wait for more. PLEASE POST SOON! I love the ick part, hehe.