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by avari20

person apple_blossum
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it! I think this is an excellent start to a very enjoyable chapter. I like how Hary is a little confunded by the babies, it only seems right that he would be..although I hope Hermione will snap out of her funk soon, she seems too much like a caring person to give up entirely. Please write more...please please...what can we do to help you find your muse again? I like this story very much and it is one of my favorites, I check for updates everyday...EVERYDAY!! There are s mahy wonderful things that could happen with Ick.. and she sounds absolutely lovely.. and I like Daddy Draco :)
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha. MOTHER. hahahaha.
person NAR
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! I never got to finish my review! I'm sorry, life has been hectic these past few days and I was completely intent on finishing. Thanks for the email, though could you perhaps send a link if it isn't too much trouble?
I really, really like Draco. You make him cute without making him sappy, keep him haughty and arrogant and you do execute it perfectly. We see that fatherhood does in fact change him greately. Pansy and Ron are fighting like an old married couple already. I wish Harry had a bigger role in this though. He himself never had a father and it would be interesting to see how you chose to make respond to it.
Nonetheless, great chapter (but I would never, ever expect anything less from you).
person johntheheavy
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
edit- im in agreement with Moi above and just wanna say that i find myself reading your fic over and over its so good! I personally find the humor refreshing cause you don't get too much of that. I enjoy the relationship between draco and 'ick' and hope he makes a good daddy! Only thing that brings it down for me is how hermione is acting but i suppose that will be explained later ^^
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! it has humor, emotion, plot, a very sick hummor that is AWSOME! i love it i think this is fun and i can not wait to red more of it when its ready!!!!!
person sailormoonhannah
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahahahaha!! that chapter was FUNNY!! I LOVE it!! you ROCK!! PLEASE update soon!!
person kayko15
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love it! It's cool. It's funny. Everything a fic needs. Still no kissing but I can deal with that. Oh well. When you get the chance update soon. Later. K15
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far.
person Kenda
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!!! I love Draco's reaction and relationship with Ick it's so cute as is her name. And Narcissa is just fantastic she has me in stitches. Poor Hermione though, feeling so nervous about the baby, due to her parents fate. Oh and Ron mucking up the spell and creating twins was just genius. I have three words though...more, more, more....please.
person LaLa
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally love tis story!!! Update soon!!!