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by avari20

person Elena
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It kept me laughing the whole way through. Update soon.
person Donavon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its just a brilliant plot, and with each chapter it just gets better.
More please, and thanks for a great read.
person prettyinpink
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wait, so Ick, who we saw in the 1st chapter isn't 'real'? she was created by magic and was originally a doll? i'm very confused
person lemonade
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa is going to die before she meets her grandchild!! Draco's going to avada her! It figures the Weasleys have twins. Too funny. Harry seems like a good father candidate. I still think Hermione has the right idea. They are just so young it's terrifying to think about.
person Sunny
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaawww this is the cutest story ever!!!! I loved Draco with Ick in the first chapter...and everything following was just so dang sweet!!!! Please please please update soon!!!
person Midnight Assassination
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lmao! XD That was seriously hularious at the end. "Potter meet Ick." XD
person Chavela
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again I tell you... Brilliant. Your muse may have worn off but it didn't let you down. May I say that I am completely devoted to this story and any up coming chapters or more stories that come our way. I was rolling with the descriptions of Draco dancing the jig. Hilarious. And the fact that Ick is so adorable does add to my enjoyment. Potter's joy over the whole thing is very comical and Draco's parental instincts kicking in makes this run through for your chapter seven a total DELIGHT!!!!
I can't wait till it is fully updated followed by more chapters. Looking forward to them all.
You devoted fan, Isa!
person sailormoonhannah
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe hormonal Gryffindors hehe!! I LOVED this chapter!! you ROCK!! PLEASE update soon!!
person tashi
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome! hilarious story, please email me when you've updated
person johntheheavy
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
jesus is that clothing spell work like daily? and i think over here in england telling someone to fuck off is pretty much universal lol