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by avari20

person Chavela
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The updated version of the chapter seven was brilliant and sweet and hilarious. All roled in one just like the other chapters. I especially liked the part that his clothes disappeared and he screamed 'MOTHER'. That was just fanatical, I laughed so hard. Your writing style is so cool.
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay i like it. i cant wait for a next update.
person Lily
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome! can't wait for more. I can't wait to see what Narcissa does next. Draco and Hermione too.
person elektrik_storm
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!!!
person johntheheavy
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i also like how you ended chap 7 its short and sweet.........
person daniel
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Ronald had screwed up the spell at the last second, and turned the baby into twins. And Pansy was upstairs ready to make him pay"
"He bent close to Potter
person jen
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg you are HILARIOUS. i LOVE this chapter. you're brilliant. absolutly brilliant!!!
person elektrik_storm
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heya! love it! narcissa is fantastic!" please update soon! i take it hermione can't have kids or something.. *ponders*
person jen
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
once again, you're brilliant. i love it love it love it! its brilliant. funny funny funny!
update update update!!!
person angelathene
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, i must have more. very good update though. your writing style is very enjoyable. i'm quite curious to see how things progress. my favorite part though was malfoy's innner thoughts, "we're in serious trouble here mate". genius!