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by avari20

person Chavela
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. It was really good. It was cute. I can't wait for the next.
person csckim2001
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man I made it as far as the third chapter before I had to stop and write a review. This is bloody hilarious. I absolutely adore this story!!! The way you inject humor into it is seamless and not once does it interrupt the flow of the story, which i have to to say is excellent. Lord I love this story. I'm usually a fan of a staid, serious Draco but this one is just as charming...maybe even more. Hats of to you for a wonderful job. Now I will get back to the story.
person LunaGrrl
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story. It was so very well written and your flare for humor kept me reading until the end. I hope to see more of this story very soon. You're doing a wonderful job here honey. Remember to keep up the good work and to keep writing. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you very soon!!!!!

~Luna ^__^
person lemonade
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, he calls her 'Ick'. Still. Ah, well. Maybe if he introduces Ick to Mom, she'll quit taking all of his clothes. Over and over and over. I dig your Harry. He's darling. And Ron... arguing with a woman... does he ever stop? ;D
person Donavon
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just gets better with every chapter. You have just got to feel sorry for Draco.
Lovely interplay with Hermione and Harry. Really enjoying. Thank you Best wishes.
person Stacy
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this story! At some parts I started laughing out loud, and my roommate came in and told me to shut up. lol. I love the baby's name!
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!
person csckim2001
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
[i]According to the Super-Condensed Psychological Theories and You.[/i]

That title is hilarious! I spent a good five minutes laughing over it before I could even continue. Even Hagrid
person whatanoddgirl
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this story. Can't wait for the next update!!
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lmfao! Another two great chapters! Please update soon!

And yes, British people *do* give "the finger". It's a common thing, as is giving someone the formal salute (the forks). The Forks, generally means Up yours, or sod off, or piss off. While the bird means F*ck you.

I liked the interaction between the "married" couples and do hope you have more of it lined up. I also hope Harry (or Draco) don't get hurt too badly in the course of this fic. I wonder what Pansy and Ron will name their twins? Keep up the great work!

Bek