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by avari20

person Edel
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg! *screams* how could you leave it like that?!?! *calms down* brilliant fic, I love it. You have me in tears from all the bloody laughing!! Anyways, could you possibly email me when this fic is updated? Thank you so much!
person Midnight Assassination
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
;-; That was so! sad! I wanted so much to hug him..... and to become Hermione and give him what he wanted >.> But that's another thing. Lol. I liked this chapter alot.
person johntheheavy
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay go get her draco! I love the comedy as usaul and how draco is with his mother^^
person jen
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it! it was a FANTASTIC idea to have the mirror showing the worst fears! ive never read that ANYWHERE before
GREAT JOB
person Ava
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am officially hooked on this story. Great chapter. I can't wait to read more and see what Draco does to get out of the shadows. ;)
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I LOVED THAT CHAPTER! PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
person Bek Allen
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh brilliant addition! I liked the idea of the Mirror of Erised's opposite. Please update soon, and keep the laughs coming. :)

Bek
person blondiexoxo
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww its got me teary eyed at the end well cant wait till more chapters come out till then ttyl
person NAR
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You nearly gave me a heart attack when I read my inbox. 8/9, I thought you meant 8 parts of 9 finished. I started to flip out and was inconsolable and brooding for a good twenty minutes before reading this.
Thanks for the linkage and you're putting them out faster than I can read them!
It's amazing how you do it all so well- from comedy to tragedy. The transition is smooth and flawless. You have the whole spectrum equally well (hope this makes sense. I haven't had much sleep, forgive me). It wasn't very dark which I liked (though I do enjoy darkfic, it regular darkfic wouldn't go well in conjuction with the rest of FPP), you preserved the feel of it and developed the plot and character further. Though what I really enjoyed about FPP was the break from the all the angstangst drama drama bliss drama angstangst out there, the chapter is excellent. Hermione is much more supressed in this chapter and I think you need to make her a little more stronger and proactive. The imagry in the last bit was very well done, but perhaps you could make it a little more vivid?
Draco calling his mother "woman" bothers me, just a tad, but maybe it's just me. Doesn't seem like him to be so disrespectful and flippant to his mother. And tiny error with his father's name. Lucius, no "o". I'm a stickler for spelling.
Brava.
person Given2Fly
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just....wow. I mean, seriously. WOW.

That has to be one of the most well written stories I've ever read. You have undeniable talent and I must say that for the first time in a LONG time I'm looking forward to reading an update on a story.

And now I've gotten a sort of motivation to begin working on my stories again.


Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!