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by avari20

person GriseldaMarchbanks
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oho. Draco is in love with Hermione. That could complicate things a bit...I hope they do. I've enjoyed all the humor you have suffused into this fic, which makes it extremely entertaining. I love the Malfoy pride, and your take of Narcissa. Lovely.
Keep writing!
GM
person Izumi
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Geez... I really love this Fic~ Please update soon~
person angel
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow ... that is one way to meet draco's mom again .... i hope draco find what he is looking for up there ... i hope hermione opens up to him and tell him she love him soon you know she does ...please please please update soon and later for now

angel
person bob
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dear god!!!
THIS STORY IS SOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!
I almost started to cry in this last chappy......but I know you'll make this a happy story.....just so that all your readers don't find out where you live and haunt you........or you could be mean like that and like to torment others.
Anyway.....Your sense of humor left me in stitches......I'm still laughing over some parts....jolly ranchers.....I never ever thought of them that way.
Oh......this is some conductive criticism.......I know that nothing is flawless.....and I hate saying anything bad.....but the grammar needs just a little bit of work....other than that.....I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Unfortunatly I can't write cute fluffy stories.....mine always end up dark.....although I have a good sense of humor.....I still tend to write dark stuff....le sigh =_=
anywho....keep up the awesome writing!

~bob~
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY i loved the update. awesome the whole mirror aspect.
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww poor draco! but it'll turn out alright in the end
person Blipo
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love your fic!!

Was gonna hold off reveiwing because I've been scared of you since the spork comment but I could hold back no longer.

In reference to the delightful things Im sure you could do to me with said spork I will be updating in the next few days, perhaps sooner and I am working on a new chapter was we speak.

Anyway...Excellent fic, very amusing. Keep it up!
person Kenda
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow the mirror scene was brilliant, such a good idea.
person Daniel
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter!
The whole mirror thing was such a great idea!

In the fireplace - whos holding the baby? Its a litle unclear, the same about whos holding the baby while they are james Bonding through the castle.

Im really glad that he doesnt want to be in the shadows anymore- now its going to be interesting, right?

DSL
person Chavela
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHH!!!! That was so awesome> another awesome chapter. It just seems that they get better and better which almost seems impossible. But with Draco's discovery, that just makes it so great. And all the stuff with them trying to get to the Headmaster's office was hilarious. I could just picture Draco sliding along the wall while whispering frantically to Hermione and the whole time her being so calm. So great. I can't wait till the next chapter. I hope it's good as well.
I'm glad that Draco doesn't want to stand aside anymore. It's kinda unnerving that Hermione isn't as persistant with thier child. I'm sure though that things will change. I just thinks it's so nice that Draco is so prideful and find it annoying thath Hermione is treating it just as a project instead of a real breathing living child. But I know you do your thing and it'll be awesome.
Update soon.
PEACE