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by avari20

schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter again!!!!
person slouchyduck
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, my favorite scene so far has got to be ron hauling ass for high ground with pansy on his heels. i almost fell out of my seat picturing that one.
person Truth44 not logged in
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've got me again. I'm loving how this whole thing is progressing. Very realistic. And I can't help but wonder if Harry's in love with Hermione. That would make things more interesting, but also harder for Draco. I absolutely adore Ick. I love how her name is like the first thing Draco said when she was first "born." She's so attached to draco to; will she and Hermione ever get a chance to bond.

ANd omg, the stuff with the mirror...

OMG OMG OMG!!

What's Draco going to do?!

Update soon!
Truth
person kayko15
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I laugh at Malfoy. He's so love struck. Anyway. Love this story. UPdate soon. Later. K15
person meg20
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a brilliant way to get a real kid!!! Love Narcissa's prancks and so glad that Draco took Hermione with him to the mansion. Pansy chasing Ron cause he screwed up and they got twins is totally fun!!!
person firewall
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch ? - I know I've probably said this before but I love your story. It's humourous, witty and fast-paced. You also take twists and turns that are least expected. Bravo.
person gyrlfrend
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That last part was just great! Definitely a more serious tone, but I still loved it. I liked how Draco realized he was in love with Hermione. Definitely can't wait to read more and find out what he intends to do about it. I have a feeling he'll get Mummykins to help him out :)
person Kristal
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!
Please upadate soon!!
i loved the dialouge btween Draco and Mummykins!! haha so funny
mucho luv
Kristal
person Donavon.
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant and very clever chapter. And clever Narcissa leaving
the mirror there to show him life without Hermione. Update soon,
really enjoying the story.
person sailormoonhannah
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh poor Draco!! I dont want him to be sad!!! this chapter was AWESOME!! you ROCK!! PLEASE update soon!!