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by avari20

person Lily
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
amazing, I was really really scared during the Lamia chase. I could not stop reading. on the edge of my seat, and to think that thing wasn't just a figment of your imagination, but was in a monster book. I'm glad Hermione will be okay, but what is this about other scars? I'd like to know. waiting, patiently (give me more now!) for the next chapter. Love, Lily
person sailormoonhannah
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this chapter ROCKED!! I LOVED it!! PLEASE update soon!!
person firewall
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 10 - Well you blindsided me! Here I thought you were going for a typical relationship story and what do you do but throw in some adventure and action. Brilliant! I love the way Narcissa manipulates in your story and I must admit I really enjoy Ick! What a little character...so like Draco. I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your story.
person blondiexoxo
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey love it cannt wait till u update
person Me :]
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fantastic! but I have to say, i've been checking everyday since you last updated and its KILLING ME! please update soon, or I will be forced to kneel and grovel at your feet.
person Ari
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this! And I was LMAO at poor Draco and enjoying every moment of it. Ron, Pansy and their teins were absolutely priceless and I was thrilled with ow Draco finally realizd he loves Hermione. Marvelously perfect. More please, soonest!
person joni
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy crap that was really good. hope you finish soon =0 ) good job
person jay
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! i know this is gonna be a d/hr classic like "their room" or "we'll always have paris"..... that had me laughing so much. good job, really. i do hope you update soon cuz im so anxious to see what happens next. verry verry good job =0 )
person oetbmalfoysmom
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first nine chapters all in one sitting. Very engrossing story! I really enjoy plots that include a lot of narrative from Draco's point of view. You do an excellent job of portraying Draco's inner conflict over his feelings for Hermione. Their interactions with Ron, Pansy, and Harry were great. Narcissa is a hoot! Can't wait to see what happens next~

person Althea
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, :cries: I laughed so many times, you have no idea. And ICK is just adorable.