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by avari20

person NAR
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. You outdo yourself with every chapter! I love the action in this chapter. It was very, very good. You kept me on the edge of my seat throughout. I also liked the little bit at the end. It's one tiny, tiny line, but there's so much mystery to it. I desperately await your next update.
person lizZY
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY I CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR THE UPDATES
PLEASE KEEP WRITING
LIZZY
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my good lord.

Avari,

This was just amazing! I was truly and completely breathless. The Lamia action was just... oh Good lord. This was brilliant. Please, Please update soon!

My heart is still in my throat.

Bek

Who is now going to make sure she doesn't have a heart attack whilst reading again.
person Kenda
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! That was brilliant, amazing and fantastic. More soon please I can't wait to see Draco's declaration.
person Lrndng
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHH!! So much adventure .. LOVING this story!!
person SeductionsClaim too lazy to log in
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHEEEeeeeeeeeeee awesome chapter! more soon please!
person JG15
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this just keeps getting better and better! keep up the great work!
Cant wait for more!
person angel
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. in glad that ick is taking to mione ..i hope mione see the love that draco and ick have for her and loves them back .. and what happen to her back befor the lamia ..please please please updat soon ..later for now

angel
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this last chapter! It was just WOW, amazing! Please continue as soon as possible, I can't wait for more!
person Jo
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really funny. keep up the good job.