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by avari20

person rox4787
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it cant wait to read more
person Ari
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh, what a GREAT chapter!!! Looks like Ick realizes Mommy was trying to protect her and is ready to bond with her. But I bet Hermione freaks a bit when she wakes up and realizes who is sharing her bed (other han Ick, of course;)
person elektrik_storm
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
want to read more and find out about the scars! please update soon! i love this fic!
person johntheheavy
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
simply awesome
person AK
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dear me!

this was a such a great chapter. All the danger and suspence, not to mention the comedic moments.

I loved the Hermione/Vivica moment in the library. How she was thinking that she'd been reduced to bribing an infant. Not to mention how Ick was weighing the pros and cons of accepting something from the crazy lady. As to the Lamia/Hermione battle well, I was on the edge of my seat! I can just see a bloody Hermione holding up a sword doing battle with the Lamia.

I've named some of my favorite parts however my favorite part has got to be the end, what with Draco determined that "he was going to make sure she knew that he wasn
person Dracolove
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SO GOOD! MOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Edel
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a gripping update. Whoa. Was not expecting that much action!! lol. But yay, Draco saved the day! :P email me again when the new update is posted (soon I hope!!)? Thanks!
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great. i cant wait for the next one. seriously im here waiting.
person Emily
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. I look forward to reading more soon.
person Iris
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome action scene, I cant wait until the next chapter! :]