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PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Wonderful story!
I can't wait for the next chapter!

I love this story but how come it keeps coming up to the top of the story list, when it
obviously has not been updated? This is about the forth time it's happened.

wicked good!!!!!!

Well, you've done it once again. Another wonderful chapter, Avari. I loved this one. The attack of the Lumia was awesome, and it was great to see how Hermione fought to protect Vivica no matter what. I suppose it's something "the old" Hermione would do as well, but I like to think that her strength spurned from the protectiveness a mother has their child. It's a very powerful force.

Malfoy's reaction to the incident was good, too. You kept both characters in character, which I thank the God's for, and I loved how he enlarged Hermione's bed and got in with Ick. His determination to win her over makes me smile, though I'm pretty certain it's not going to be as easy as he thinks it is.

Awesome work
Truth

This is brilliant! You\'ve completely drawn me in... I was so upset to see that this was the last chapter! I\'ve loved all of it so far, and can\'t wait to see what\'s next. If you have an update list, could you add me to it? Thanks for an excellent story

Oh my.. I can't express how much I LOVE your story! Its definately my favorite so far, and I've read MANY fanfics! Its very original, I really like the concept. I got through the first 9 chapters in a flash. The way you write is so captivating! I can't believe this is your first fanfic! You have all the character's personalities down perfectly. Ick seems so adorable, and very smart, just how I'd picture Draco and Hermione's child to be! I full-heartedly encourage you to write more, and I will hunt you down and demand you to write the next chapter if you stop now! If its not too much trouble, can you email me when you update your story? If not, thats fine! Keep up the great work, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what an excellant chapter!!!!!!!!!! I can hardly wait to read the rest...please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

I haven't laughed this much at a story in a long, long time!!! Believe me I needed a good laugh and it was the perfect medicine. I wouldn't be able to quote everything in here that brought a smile to my face and had my husband wondering why I was laughing hysterically at our laptop. Excellent job and congrats on the nomination. Good luck.

Poor Draco if he really believes that life will go back to normal! Wow! Excellent chapter. Definitely one of my favorites. I was beginning to think you had abandoned us, but so glad to see that you haven't, lol. Can't wait to read more.