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by avari20

person LaLa
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! this was too funny. Poor draco, can't get what he wants.
Please update soonner.
person Ari
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just read Chapter 11 and it was absolutely brilliant!!! You get my vote for sure, luv.
person Lrnd
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEHE I love the trauma .... hahaha
person Given2Fly
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Can't wait for the next bit!
person johntheheavy
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like whats going on between Neville and millicent! I hope you include them more in the fic! Jolly Good Show!
person NAR
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Made my day! You're terrific, enough said.
person sheedy
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Run boys!!!!!! Don't look back she's gaining on you!
person MistDragon
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on creating an outstanding story. Entertaining with great characterisations and an underlying plot line to keep you readers hooked. It is so funny that a war against the darkest evil in their world could not unite them but dirty nappies have established what could be a lasting bond between the boys. And like everyone else.... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
person Sami
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cheers! Great job on this chapter. Brilliant work on the explantion of Luna's personality. I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Luna... hope she'll be fine with baby Hazel! Great chapter!