rate_review Reviews

I'm really enjoying your story. !!!! Write more soon

Nice, I really liked the Draco/Ick dynamic and the insight on how the rest of the school handles the FPP and how Draco works Ick into his life... though I think it could have been better developed and the new chapter has no flow. It's choppy and I think it needs to be edited more. There's no buildup into each part, they just happen. For example, Millicent had some development to it, but it was disconnected. Quidditch practice was uneeded and felt like it was thrown in there as filler. Had no real purpose to it, at least none which I could discern.
What the hell had she fed the child, anyway?
Did Draco not feed her in the Great Hall earlier? Then you can't say that, can you?
And.... BLAISE!!! I'm sorry. I love Blaise in fanfiction. Edit some more, but keep him around. Ah, how I love Blaise so.

Oh such a great chapter! I can't wait to sind out what happens!

Oh.....my god.
HOLY CRAP
that was the most AWESOME thing I have EVER read.....beyond belief. You have no idea how hard I laughed throughout the ENTIRE thing. And it's not even one of the stereotypical stories either!!
Wow. You are AWESOME....
I cannot even tell you how amazing you are....
I love your writing to DEATH
Please let me know when you update; this is way too good to pass up

just...
wow.


you are amazing.

(I feel like i'm repeating myself. but that can't hurt!)

LOL

<3's
~violetshimmer~

aww i hope u update soon

nice story. believable among the others ive read...but "late Severus Snape"? he died? i thought he was spoiling Ick future in the first chap? just clarifying...please continue the fic, its really a good read

This is one of my favorite stories...it's really nice how well you make your humor work. Many times humor in these romance stories can come out either sounding stupid or completely out of character...great job at the character work and dialogue especially. Update soon!

*giggles* omg this is SO good, and so origonal! i loveeeeeeeeeee it much! write more!!

I wasn't too sure about the premise of this story when I first started reading, but you've won me over. Update soon. :)

awesome chapter. the redone version is great. :) i really enjoyed the whole slytherin and ick aspect.