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by avari20

person Heather
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! It is my current favorite, and I can't wait for you to update again! MORE MORE MORE!!! Ick is SO cute!
person Anon
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please keep writing !!!!!! I will love u forever if u update soon and make it a good long one!!!

person Juls
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO omg thats funny!! she fainted while kissing him!!! lol but that could be easily explained.. maybe she fainted cos he kisses the great!!! lol but anyways that was a great update!!! i can't wait for more!! u have 2 update soon!!!
person pbwnjelly
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh...shivers! I LOVE a fiery and possessive Draco...mmm...and I adore your story! It's so funny and lighthearted, and enjoyable! Love it!
person PinkTribeChick
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! I could see Hermione forgetting to breathe simply because of the shock of who's kissing her, not to mention the force with which Draco was kissing her.
Anyway - it was hillarious, if a bit of a short chapter compared to the previous ones! Keep up the great work, though, and more soon please! 8~D
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lesson the first: DON'T STOP BREATHING 'MIONE!

This was brilliant! I'd like to know more about this Michael fellow though. That gets me all "ooooh". But, kudos to Draco for dealing with him in such a manner. LoL. Please update soon!

Bek
person Jess
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So I'm a little confused as to where this Micheal guy came from. In the beginning of the story, didn't Hermione kiss Harry?? So how can she so easily go from kissing Harry to kissing this Micheal kid?? It just doesn't seem like her. And it seemed pretty out of the blue.
person lemonade
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it's absolutely possible for someone to forget to breathe during a kiss. I also think it's funny that Hermione is going to murder Draco. ;D I hope she doesn't do it in front of her daughter, though. Even though she's not a real person. Draco IS being a bit high handed if he intends to win Hermione. I guess he'll find out soon that she doesn't take kindly to being bossed.
person sheedy
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this fic please update soon.
person lemonade
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I forgot about Harry!! He seems so caught up in it, why doesn't he try it with Luna? (that WAS where you were going, right?) I dig your Harry.