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by avari20

person Ayesha
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
person loki
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Fic!!!
This has been sooo much fun reading...Keep posting, I'm all anxious to see what'll happen next.
Oh...and, what happens at the end of the year? Everyones getting mighty attached to these little bundles of joy that aren't real...
person nei
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! this is sooo awesome! it's sooo good that i forget about my lunch n got it burned!
person LilTinyBee
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Albino gorilla?! Hermione forgot to breathe :D hahaha!! That was too funny! I love this story so much! It's one of my top three faves. Will you update at fanfiction.net or just wait until March 1st? I guess I'll have to go over there and check. I can't wait to find out what Hermione does to him and I hope there are more scenes with Ick soon. Little cutie!

Excellent job so far!!

person purplegurl
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now I only have one complaint about this story....You aren't bloody writing it fast enough. **wink, wink, nudge nudge**

Although I do have a couple of questions...MIchael? Huh? - Don't get that

Why are there old scars on Hermione's back? and What's the whole deal about her at the beginning with almost being afraid of kids and really ticked off at Dumbledore? Really I just want to know more of the back story. MORE MORE MORE
person Anon
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! need more!
person ficcing it
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!! I adore this fic and how possessive Draco is! There really isn't anything better than a gorgeous jealous boyfriend who, at the same time, would never hurt you no matter how angry he is.

OHHhhh and Ick is adorable!! children aren't really very interesting but she's oddly intelligent and yes, very Malfoy-ish. please update sooN!!
person reader85
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I do hope that you continue this soon. You are a brilliant writer and I can\'t wait to see where you plan to take this.
person like
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. like wow
person undershadows
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really like the story, can't wait to read the rest!

Nice twist for Draco character :)