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by avari20

person patricia and lisa
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow....i love this story...just waiting for the last chapter....
person firewall
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was one exciting chapter!!! Yipppeee!
person firewall
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story has consistently remained one of my favourites. You combine action and storyline beautifully! Thanks for sharing and I'm looking forward to the newest and last chapter. {sigh}
person amoraluv
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I luv it!!!! This is the spunkiest thing I have read having to deal with Hermoine and Draco. Hope to see a couple of new chapters soon. Great job!!!
person Anon
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad you put up new chapters!!! I adore this story...
So one thing has me thinking...in the beginning of teh story...ick is there...but umm...isnt' she a doll...wont se eventually go back to being a doll? what would the chances of them concevining the same child as their doll be?
person Experience My Dreams
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person votehermione
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great. now i cant wait for the next update.
person Empress
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very, very, very good story. I like how well thought out it is as well as the fact that Luna isn't only sadly crazy here.

I so look forward to the final chapter of the story.

Again, great work.
person Mac
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! Babies and clueless men. Love It! Plenty of giggles. Especially when Mellicent was chasing Neville Down on Her Broom.HEEE!
Up-Date Quickly my wee heart cant stand the suspence
person Inkette
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I love it! Complete and utter awesomosity, if you dont mind me saying so!