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by avari20

schedule July 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! I was devastated over the babies turning back ):
person Trelweny
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The most brilliant and well-written crackfic I've ever read! No offense intended... but what else am I to think with Draco calling his child Ick while reminding her of Malfoy pride and superiority or Narcissa plaguing her son with baby paraphernalia followed by hourly clothes vanishing?

I enjoyed this story immensely. It made me laugh so hard... so often. Absolutely entertaining. I giggled each time I read a Slytheren cared for Ick. Especially Snape.

...So Millicent caught Neville in the end? Did I interpret that correctly?

Thanks so much for writing!
person thegirl191
schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing story :) Just perfect. Ive read a lot of fanfiction and this was the best ive read :D thankyou for your story
person linda
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story i read it over and over
person martha
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
such a great story. It's a reall origional concept written in a great style.
person Robs
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story! Found via a looking for a fic post, I decided to give it a go. I actually laughed out loud on several occasions! And a fantastic ending to top it off. Ick and Ack; BRILLIANT!!!
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've ever laughed so bloody hard... HAH! I mean... really! The disappearing clothes, and the "make me, draco" baby painting... Holy crap, that was funny. And it was well done.
So, thanks for that!
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is HILARIOUS...I love the internal and external Draco monologue/dialogue - he is so funny, I'm cackling (that's right I wrote cackling) aloud.
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a wonderfully rich and rewarding story.
person the norwegian girl
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwww!!! and after that theres really not much to say, i loved it,and also I got a bit teary eyed at the ending :)