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countinue please.....very nice starting...loved it
ja ne

hey read your fic and i loved it!! incredibly powerful and thought provoking, an emotional read!!! keep it up!!!

Not too bad at all. I like the idea that Draco is a little sh*t for a reason and that he's been taught to act superior but feel like a worthless heap of nothing. It rings true. I also like how he pities the others who cry when they're branded. It shows how someone can come to accept and even appreciate such cruelty at the same time they loathe it. It's a good illustration of how the cycle is perpetuated. The only thing that really jumped out at me grammatically was this sentence: "I believe that time spent in St. Mungo