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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry that I took so long to come and read this! Thank you so much for responding to my challenge - and in a way that I had not imagined!
This was so nicely written, and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Very nice characterisations and it kept me engaged throughout the story.
This was so nicely written, and I enjoyed it thoroughly. Very nice characterisations and it kept me engaged throughout the story.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, it
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*eagerly graps cookie and munches away*
Not one other reader bothered to review? How sad! Well anyway, I liked the roots of the plot one can see so far (again), it *is* capturing ^^, but the second chapter was really far to short. Half of the fun when reading is to fully emerge in the story, but as soon as I had me imagination geared up and running I had to stop again *pokes the author*. You try to describe very detailed the happenings, thats a great deal of fun and usually the sign of a talented author, only you need to keep an close eye on not to use one word repeativly which is always a hazard, when trying to go in detail. It does not actually happen here, I just thought it might be helpfull to mention it.
All in all: great work! (and I hope I made sense?)
Not one other reader bothered to review? How sad! Well anyway, I liked the roots of the plot one can see so far (again), it *is* capturing ^^, but the second chapter was really far to short. Half of the fun when reading is to fully emerge in the story, but as soon as I had me imagination geared up and running I had to stop again *pokes the author*. You try to describe very detailed the happenings, thats a great deal of fun and usually the sign of a talented author, only you need to keep an close eye on not to use one word repeativly which is always a hazard, when trying to go in detail. It does not actually happen here, I just thought it might be helpfull to mention it.
All in all: great work! (and I hope I made sense?)
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi ^^
that sounds like a real great story start to me. I like your fluent writing style, and you have me really curious where are you going to stir this story to. Poor Remus *sniffels* my heart goes out for him (lol I love hurt comfort stuff, hurt he certainly is, any chance for a comfort part as well?). Sorry, thats the best review I can give in english, I just thought your efforts deserve some recognisation, even if it only in my broken english. So now, be a nice author, stop wasting your time reading stupid reviews and go and write more and post it soon. Yours Mara
that sounds like a real great story start to me. I like your fluent writing style, and you have me really curious where are you going to stir this story to. Poor Remus *sniffels* my heart goes out for him (lol I love hurt comfort stuff, hurt he certainly is, any chance for a comfort part as well?). Sorry, thats the best review I can give in english, I just thought your efforts deserve some recognisation, even if it only in my broken english. So now, be a nice author, stop wasting your time reading stupid reviews and go and write more and post it soon. Yours Mara