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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent!! I'm sooo loving this story! Please update ASAP!!!!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So now Draco knows how Harry feels. Did Dumbledore have to tell the whole school? The idiot! Talk about no privacy! What happens in chapter 5?
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories i've ever read! but why Snape? i like him. anyway, the chapters are to short!
I need more chapters!
Keep up the good work!
XDXDXD
I need more chapters!
Keep up the good work!
XDXDXD
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, happy holiday
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I don't like is that Dumbledore told everyone that Harry was raped. I have never been raped, but I don't think it would be good emotionally for people to know someone was raped before that person had come to terms with it. And I'd think Dumbledore would know that. Anyway, I'm sure you'll find a way to work around it (or just ignore it). I look forward to more.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far. One thing to edit is thaat you can't apparate on the Hogwarts grounds, now mabe in your story you can I'm just pointing out that in canon you can't. Other thn that itty bitty little thing your doing wonderful! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's all he died? Made him leave? The man raped Harry! He plans to bring Voldemort back! Need chapter 4!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start. You need a beta, though. Your thoughts are a little jumbled, and a beta can help you out with that. Check on the home page of this website, you'll find a couple of addresses for Yahoo groups, one of them is a link to the beta group. You should have no problem finding one there. Keep up the good work! It's getting good!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well? what happens next?