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for Dead Eyes

by omnichild

person StoryJunkie
schedule February 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all. M/M isn't really my kind of thing, but you do have excellent technique, and articulate loquacion (is that really a word?)
person Allorna
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just read this based on ur recommend on the forum. Let me put it this way - it was well written but you left me with WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY to many questions. Why was Ron in a dark alley at this time of night? What happened to Malfoy?!?!? Why does he look like that? What did Malfoy mean when he made that comment to Ron, I think it was "I've missed you" or something like that. Anyway, I liked your writing style.
person BloodWhore468
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There's more right?