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for The 12 Days of X-Mas

by tamiveldura

person gyspy
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHHH!!!!! (Yells, banging head on computer desk... Glances hopefully up at the evil screen... Nope! No relief to be found in hidden chapters... Sulks on to next story for the day.) WWWAAAHHHH!!!

AS USUAL - GREAT WORK!
person libldyjean
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM

in case i haven't reviewed this story before ... i want to tell you i love it. the mystery, the smile slowing forming on Sev's face not to mention the "emotional smile" i can see changing his ora--not too much-just a bit in a "happy/contented" direction, the wonderfully playful/creative planning for each day have all helped to make this a very enjoyable read to look forward to--i can't waite for the after-Christmas portions.
i got to the end of this day's reading and burst out into such laughter as i can't remember is quite a while. i am so looking forward to tomorrow because of this story. (my Christmas is happening just a little later this year. i'm a big girl, [not to mention old--mid-40s] and can live with that, but having something this cute to look forward to-- this i wasn't expecting--thank you)
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not really important, but just some information for if you decide to edit this story! 'The twelve days of Christmas' START on Christmas day and end on the night before Epiphany / Three Kings day (6th Jan). Basically the chuch 'seasons' are:

ADVENT first sunday in december -> 24th Dec.
CHRISTMAS 25th Dec -> 5 Jan.
EPIPHANY 6 Jan -> Ash wednesday.

Hope that helps!
person absinthe
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooo. More, please more. Please be a really nice author and post ohh, I don't know, one minite after midnight, wherever you are. PLEASE!!!!!! bouncing in my chair in excitement
person Amanda
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH GOSH! Only one more day! I'm excited and upset lol I cannot wait to read it!
person SandraM
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFL---LMAO.
person Fleur de Lis
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Poor Sev! Oh please tell me it turns out alright!
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor severus don't make him cry.

i like it very funny i will be waiting at midnight. see ya
person uhh
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! one more day..please finish..........ahhhh......love fanfic......must read more.......no more to read......NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
person cupotrevor
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's 11:45 on christmas eve where i am..i know how severus felt in this last chapter..not much hope of seeing the last one posted in the next 15 minutes so i'll check back later tomorrow..loved this story...happy holidays!!