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for Trapped with the Enemy

by darkheartchick

schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Anon: I intended for the 'unlikely' part to apply more to Lena and the fact that Draco even has a sister (in the story) whom we are just learning of.
person Sorceress14
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that house is beautiful. That's how I picture the manner, as well except maybe a bit darker and drearier to fit the Death Eater life style. Anyway, although on the short side, this chapter was really fun to read. Above all else, your desriptions knock me completely off my feet. I could never desribe something so well. And you do it with even the smallest, most meaningless things. You turn them into something important and that's a good quality for a writer to have. I can't wait to see what will happen when Draco and Harry finally come face to face. And what will be Lena's reaction to Harry and Draco's hatred? I'm shaking with excitement already! Please update soon, I'm gonna read this one to the very last word, rest assured. :D Oh and before I go, I have one question. Is this story going to involve incest or is it just a love triangle between Harry, Lena, and Draco? Either way, I'll read it, I was just curious. Keep up the fabulous work!

~Sorceress14

P.S.
Thanks once again for mentioning me! It's like seeing my name in lights! You tell me you enjoy reading my reviews and I get panicked and try to use big words, lol. I get nervous because you're such an amazing writer. Thanks again :)

person Anon
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not very unlikely to be trapped inside malfoy manor with draco, seeing as the bloke lives there...
person Sorceress14
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, thanks so much for mentioning me in your story, I feel honored!!! I can't believe this story isn't getting more reviews, it's bound to be fabulous! Anyway, I love how you are building it up so far, it is really intriguing! Lena seems like she could become a character I could really enjoy reading about. I can't wait for Harry to come and stay at Malfoy Manor, this will be really fun! Please update soon!!!!
person Sorceress14
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update soon! I love this fic to bits after only one chapter and I can't wait to see what happens with Draco and his sister! Keep up the fabulous writing!
person anonymous
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting start, can't wait to see what happens next.