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for Of Bruise and Broken Skin

by GlassMermaid

person Lulu
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really a terribly good story. It's dark and sad but somehow has you craving for more. It's exceptionally original and will stick in my mind for a good some time. Don't give up writing. I'll be looking for more of your stories.

Well done & Merry Christmas.
person Kayy
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start.
I really like it.
Keep up the good work.
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice little diddy. Was this supposed to be just one chapter? because it doesn't seem to have the intro to lead to more plot.
person Lily
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. That was really good! I was captivated and totally drawn into the story. The way you wrote it was excellent, the way Draco spoke.. it was almost poetic. Very well done!
Pat yourself on the back! lol
person isis
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is morbidly good. a sad &evil story, yes, but well written. especially the ending. =]
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely. And terrifying. Great one-shot, and even better Draco channeling his Dad.