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for Of Bruise and Broken Skin

by GlassMermaid

schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh very nice one shot!
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am honestly at a loss for words on this one. I really loved it, despite the fact that part of me thought it was terrible, because it was. I loved it. I do hope you write more like it.
person ametomoe
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh dark! weird! very very good!
person Michelle
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is so rich in emotions. Amazing one-shot!
person Rachel
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"He draws away from her, grey eyes lit with hatred and lust, and as Ginny gazes at him, she realizes that his is a terrible beauty, like an angel fed on horror and drunk on sin."

That was the most amazing sentence ever. I loved this. It was so beautifully written.
person skibz
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow..... that was sad. really sad.... draco's a pig! Is this a one shot or will you continue??? will harry find out? will ginny remember? ..... it was really disturbing but very well written. Good job.
person Heather
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I like this. Is there going to be more or is this a one shot thing.
person Batmanda
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was written beautifully. i'm in love with your work. its short, but straight to the point. it fits in with the stories and i can't belive how well this is done. good job, i tip my hat to you.
person Kate
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great wording, Draco is portrayed spot on. Are you going to run with the idea of him having her again for fun, or are you finished?
person Daisy Mae
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perfect. Exquisite. Is there an award somewhere for this writer? Nothing is better than an evil, plotting Draco Malfoy.