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for She Married Her Choice

by averygoodun

person Anon
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Boo
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ye-ah! Sooooo good! I'm really glad to have a sequel to read now-- it was starting to get lonely 'cause there was no Marry a Choice left. :( But now I'm happy because I have this one! Yay! Keep up the good work!
Oh, the lemon was good, by the way-- just the way I like 'em. :)
person amethystique
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very enjoyable WIP. I know that Severus is OOC but you have really outdone yourself with this one! CHICKEN POX! Genius!!!! I loved the prequel and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Mail me when the next bit is up PLEASE???? LOL and Merry Christmas ;o)X
person anya
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a 'real' consummation; yet, still wonderful. Brilliantly done.
person Rhiannon
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your wedding night was refreshingly realistic, while still being superb!

I have one concern...

"It would have surprised her how quickly she was able to fall into sleep, had she been awake."

Okay, this wasn't a dream was it? Say it wasn't a dream! I mean she fell asleep after all that really happened, and she couldn't be surprised how quickly she fell asleep, because she JUST fell asleep. Right? She'll be surprised in the morning, right?
person angel
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it and i cant wait in till then next chapter ... and didn't draco know it was his wedding night ... draco should just have waited in till morning ... please please update soon... keep upthe awesome work and later for now

angel
person snapeluva
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yayyy!!! I'm so glad you're doing a sequel!! Great first chapter...Snape with the chicken pox; too funny!!!! Please update soon!!
person lemonade
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How cute is this! It was a bit romantic, too. ((hugs)) Thanks for the sequel
person dryade
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How wonderfull that you decided to continue. I love this first chapter.