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for BONDED Part One

by KiKiandKay

person sunako-chan
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
rough sex... kinky~
troy is in shock! omg! more happy snarry please~
person manx
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good explanation. I can hardly wait for updates. Did they love (or care about) each other at all in the past? Oh, poor Remus!
person Hambares
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to see where you are going with this. Will Severus and Harry get back together? Will they even like each other? More please!!!
person sunako-chan
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o my goodness. thats not good. what next?~
person sunako-chan
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o my goodness. thats not good. what next?~
person Nightwing
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo, i'm intrigued...
Can't wait for more
Chow for now!
person anon
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting

But do you think you could put some spaces in the summary so we don't have to scroll left/right to read it and all the others on the page

In 1996, Albus Dumbldore Bonded several couples to save the world. Fourteen years later... Angst,Language,PWP,Slave,M/F,Slash,Bi,Inc,Shouta,Minor,Anal,BDSM,B-Mod,D/s,Fist,Humil,Lemon,MaleDom,MPreg,Oral,S/H,S&M,SoloM,Spank,WD

person anon
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
would be easier if it was more like this

In 1996, Albus Dumbldore Bonded several couples to save the world. Fourteen years later... Angst, Language, PWP, Slave, M/F, Slash, Bi, Inc, Shouta, Minor, Anal, BDSM ,B-Mod, D/s, Fist, Humil, Lemon, MaleDom, MPreg, Oral, S/H, S&M, SoloM, Spank, WD

and really is your story going to have "all" of that that you need the "all" of those warnings.