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for Pretty When You Cry

by LadyRaye

person ashling
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is this a one-shot? i certainly hope not because this story could go really far if you kept going! it's absolutley incredible and i want to read more! please update soon if you can or tell us if it isn't going to continue.
person KaySan666
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story... i would love it to read a second chapter....*blush*
person TNgirl
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! But, I have a question.... If she wants a commitment then why doesn't he think she loves him? Maybe I misunderstood? I don't know where this is going, but I can't wait to find out!
person t
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this!
please do more i have to find out what happens!
person t
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet! i like it!