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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is GREAT so far! PleasepleasepleasePLEASE update!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update this story. It is excellent and I would hate to see it unfinished. Please notify me if and when you do.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gret story! I can't wait for you to finish it!
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nobody receives all positive reviews. But for us authors who work hard to bring to life upon paper our thoughts, aimless flames are not helpful. Constructive criticism is always welcome, the type that actually helps, not hinders.
This is in response to Anon
This is in response to Anon
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The beginning was trite. The name of your OC, awful. Rest your hands if they hurt. Please.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took me so long to read and review. I have been sick and then lost my internet service for a week. Blah. Anyway, nice chapter. You kept Severus in character nicely, while still sowing the seeds of attraction. I am looking forward to the next update!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was excellent! I'm really enjoying your story very much, I hope she comes too soon. Hmmm....I'm sure I could find a very naked Potions Master.....now what did I do my Maurarders Map. hee hee. Update soon.
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like you story. I can't wait to read more of it. It is really great. I didn't have a problem understanding any of it.
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh this is really getting good. I can't wait til the next chapter. Um...instead of sicking a naked Petigrew after me could you possibly send a naked Potions Master my way, pretty please *Grins*
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is an intense story. And so many myteries to be uncovered! I am glad I sat down to read this. I look forward to your next update.