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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it, awesome job! please continue!!!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue this!!!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good! The third chapter is really good!I am enjoying this fic really much! I am anticipating the next chapter!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. You
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is really really good so far! if you dont keep it up i will kick your butt. haha. just kidding about that. but it is a really good story. i cant wait for more!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe you should consider not posting again until you have a better handle on the English language...
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a fun chapter!! update soon!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT, WRITE MORE
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I understand that English is not your native language, but you really need to get a beta, or at least run a spell and grammar check in Word. It is good for a laugh though.
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHA... DAT SHITT WUZ FUNNIEE... U REALLYY NEED TO UPDATEEE... LOL