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for Eleven Canticles of Tradition

by empathicsiren

schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was fabulous. I enjoyed this so much. Very heart warming.
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* Trust me these are tears of happiness. I enjoyed every word of this story. I believe I found one mistake but I seem to have forgotten what it was. I have no complaints. This was very sweet and cute. I think this was perfect. Draco wanting a part of Harry, in more then the physical means. Him taking care of Harry but still making him feel needed. I loved the way you protrayed the top and bottom relationship, that it's not one to always top and vise verse. You are a very good writer. I felt like I was the ghost of christmas past observing them. I think they are perfect for each other. They understand each other.
I love Draco finishing what Hagrid started, even if it was only for a while. I also love the metaphors, and that Draco was the one to help him close that chapter in his life. Even though there was ooc, as every story is bound to have (hell even the last book had it, it was subtle in a way the made them seem as if they grew. Not only before we encounter them in this story but during it also.
I laughed loud and hard about the manicore donkey that was out to eat the baby Jesus. I loved the mismosh of traditions of the December holiday. I even appreciated Meleani, even though Mary Sues irk me. She was a nice refresher, and she was worthy to be compared to Hermione. He response made me question why Draco had excepted so little explaination and why Harry never bothered to look up any of it before hand.
The making of traditions was sweet too. A Christmas Carol is one of my favorite movies. I'm happy that Malfoy never grew out of calling Harry Potter. Or that Harry calls Draco, Malfoy when upset.
Maybe I'm going a little too in depth with my review and all you want to read is that I enjoyed it. Well I'm sorry for my ramblings. I truly enjoyed your story, it was very cute and heart warming. Thank you for sharing it.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole
person Raven White
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wanna know what harry got for draco and what molly said about them getting married! *sniff**whine* i love this! and i love truffles *sneeks box to draco* see, theyre no muggle *opens box and truffles fly around like mini snitches* cool, huh?
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how wonderful!
person ura
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story! I think it is the best Harry/Draco Christmas story I ever read. Not just simple fluff or angts or smut but a story which is very touching, gentle and meaningful with a deep sense and message. It is also very well written.

Thanks for creating it and sharing it with your readers!
person ura
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a question. Are you the same Empathic Siren that was writing the story Draco's Boy? What happened to that story? It was so amazing just to drop it. I hope you will finish it one day.