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for How It Should Be

by LeoZodiac

person momoko
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Nightwing
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, i can't wait for the whole reunion chapter..
Chow for now!
person momoko
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person LazySnake
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah..that was so sweet. I hope to read more soon. ^_^
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh need chapter 3! I hope Sirius tells Lucius and Draco about the threat. Harry should be careful! He afterall knows what that monster is capable of.
person anonymous
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!! Kaylie is so cute. Please update soon
person Storm
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm interesting, very interesting. I like it. Good job. So are you going to leave this as a one shot, or continue it? It's a good story either way.
person LadyX
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh i hate you but i love you! you are such a wonderful author but you leave us with cliffieish things!! i cant wait for more!
person anonymous
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great start to another great story!!!! My only problem with this is that it still felt too rushed the way things happened (Not complaining), i think it just needs to slow down a little bit. But please hurry i can't wait for another update or updates(for your other stories).
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Adrian isn't going to give up that easy! Can't wait for chapter 2!