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for How It Should Be

by LeoZodiac

person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far and am definately looking forward to updates but I also have a question. How is it that Arian was allowed to leave Sirius and Lucius' house with all his limbs intact? I sort of figured that the fact that he did is vital to your story but it just make me wonder. I mean they all saw what was happening to Harry and the fact that they had spent two years looking for him only to find out that he was with Arian the whole time being manipulated and abused. I mean Lucius alone would've kicked his arse just on principle alone and we all know that Sirius posses a mean streak and a violent temper especially when it comes to Harry. And let's not even get into what a vindictive bastard Draco Malfoy is (and we all love him for it) but the point is Draco Malfoy is possesive of Harry Potter, even when he is picking on him. From day one it was always about Harry with Draco and vise versa I mean he wanted to be his friend but Harry rejected him and he decided that if Harry wasn't going to be with him then he wasn't allowed any piece...but my point is given that they are now together do you think that someone could so obviously hurt his Harry and be able to just walk out and go home with no ramifications whatsoever? I mean if he didn't kill him right there the sneaky bastard would have had him murdered in his sleep by the next day, but I digress seeing as that fact probably plays into your plot. But as I've said before I do love your story and am looking forward to your update.

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person thrnbrooke
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 5! I'm all for hunting down the cousin and torturing him within inches of his life!
person scully
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very sweet. :)
person Nita
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ssssoooo good cant wait for more. keep up the great work. absolutely lovin ur stories. have fun writin
-Nita
person lita
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am soo enjoying this story!! I so can't wait for the next chappy!!! Your doing a great job on the story. Update ASAP!!!
person Hambares
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I especially like a protective!Draco. More please!
person Drovna Malfoy
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great... please more soon
person Sandra Smith
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellant fic but I want more
person brittany
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story
please update soon
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now Draco nows! Need chapter 4!