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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way that you created a fatherly relationship with Tom; he always seems to be a minor character but I think that in this case he was needed and fit into the story well.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh, this is turning out nicely. Please tell me when you update
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey... umm... interesting story, a little unrealistic i think in the reguards of how Hermione delt with the situation. She's to strong of a person to have put up with that shit for so long. It was a sad story, it made me cry.
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad she got away from that so called "father" of hers. I hope she feel safe once she gets to Hogwarts, I just hope someone discovers what is going on and puts a stop to this. No father has the right to that do their daughter. (Sorry don't mean to get on a soapbox, but I've been in that kind of situation before so, I know how she feels.) Anyways Great chapter and I look forward to another update!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far a very realistic look on the mind of a raped victim. Poor Hermione :(
Please update soon
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Really good start, poor Hermione.
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this story is really ugly. I really hope things will turn out for her, why isn't she in school? Why can't she run away? Please continue but make it better for her, this is really a painful story :-( Make it better!