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for Grocery Shopping

by ifyouweremine

person anon
schedule May 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was probably the best story I've read on here, and I don't say that lightly.
person Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*bout of heinous laughter from the gut!*

That was CLASSIC!!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!

That was them...

XD
person ashley
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was hot. I love how Draco kisses him in the middle of the aisle, and people are staring at them. And, what was it? "...
as he was fucked three feet away from people who had no clue what was going on behind their tidy display of juice and butter and yogurt..." I will never be able to look at that row of orange juices without laughing. Very nice. ^^
person ochibi-chwan
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope you're glad to know that I will NEVER look at that row of innocently lined-up orange juices again. omg, that was WAYYYY HOT!!! i loved it so much!
person YamiBakura
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm never going to look at that part of the grocery store the same way again. XD Wonderful story, absolutely wonderful.
person LJ
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This must be the what- twentieth relationship fic I've read today..? I believe about there. Well, they make me feel like utter shit because I'll never /ever/ have anyone to take care of and have little tuffs with over cheese where and where not to fuck.

But, this doesn't change the fact that this fic was absolutely wonderful, nor the fact that I've absolutely fallen in love with it. Wonderful job, my dear.
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was wonderful! I loved Draco's thoughts at the end. Perfect!
person Reyn
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. great job with the way you wrote the sex.
person Mephistedes
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're crazy. But I enjoyed it! Awesome job.
person poopsie
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww.....that was so cute.
I mean *cough*cough* not cute, HOT, very HOT.