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for A Game Of Chance

by sadsally

person HentaiZaru
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You scared me!!! I thought he was going to die!!! Then he didn't so I don't have to give you a verbal slap. I loved it.
person EviL
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BEST WRITER EVER! Keep it up
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Angst+Fluff= one bloody hell of a read!!! Three Irken finger WAY up!!!!!
person Amanda
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Some forget that the beauty of well-written pieces are that the grammatical aspects tend not to matter. Read the masterpiece \'Angela\'s Ashes\' by Frank McCourt if you don\'t believe me. Your fic was wonderful, and it\'s very rare to find a snarry fic with such an emotional snape that is actually believeable. To be honest, I enjoyed it too much to even care about grammar. Don\'t take the mean hearted reviews to heart. If they\'re opinion really mattered, they\'d offer to beta for you.
person Sophia
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story and I would definitely read another Snarry of yours. Yes, it was very fluffy, but I love fluffy stories, lol. Keep up the very good work with all of your stories.~Sophia
person rubydragon
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so................. sev makes harry better?? from love? is that what's happening? i'm lost........ >.<
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Snape is a brick
Fart
He is the one
The only one
Who has a brick when he farts
He is a brick
Fart
person Ditzy
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really great I love your writing style. I do think that you could do with a beta and if you want me to that I would be more than willing. Though it is absolutly brillliant so far.
person NightShade
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it's so good, I love it... I hope Harry won't die... Severus's point of view is wonderful.
person Velvetina
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was really good I like the plotline and can't wait to see Harry's recovery. However I may just suggest that you clean up the grammer etc a bit here and there bceuase it became a little hard to follow here and there? Do you have a beta? Either way for your first Snarry fic I thought it was pretty good, better than mine was *winces* well done