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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwwww, cute! *squee*
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And as always u do know how to make a reader want more stories out of u cuz u are just that awesome when it comes to writing them. *Sighs* Alas it such a sweet story and it hit u at every good part and besides I knew Draco could be a big softie when he wanted to and yes Harry makes a very nice uke and to be honest I kinda prefer him that way.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was so soo SOOOOOOOO cute!!!! I LOVED it!! More more more, I need more from you!!!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! *grin* Harry gave Draco a lap dance! Yummi!! And then they both got lucky! Now THAT'S what I call a Christmas gift! Excelent fic! *applauds*
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaawwwwwwwwww!!! how cute. lol it would've been hilarious if Za,bini actually DID get to sneak a kiss on harry before he realized what was going on. xD YAY DRACO! good thing he decided harry had suffered enough...otherwise i might have flamed you........xD if they didn't make up and have steamy make up sex afterwards.lol
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your stories. Please, keep 'em coming! (hehe... pun VERY much intended!)
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The plot is good and you have done a good job. However, you keep alternating the tense between past and present which is keeping me from voting your story (I am a member of the yahoo group). A bit of polishing will do wonders.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the theme. I'm also glad that the Slythirins were more concerned with Draco's happiness than in tormenting Harry. That was a very nice Christmas gift. Thanks!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww almost too cute to be true. Bless Harry he makes such and adorable bottom and I am so glad that you have him bottom because he's top far too often. I hope you do soome more Harry Draco work!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story a lot. Sneaky Slytherins! ;D
I did struggle reading it, though, because you skipped back and forth between past and present tense. You didn't say in your author's notes if you had anyone beta this for you, but I would suggest doing so. The story is good--I loved Pansy, and how Draco turned possessive, and how gentle they were together--but it just needs a bit of polishing. If you don't have someone to beta for you, I'd volunteer. Just let me know.
Overall, though, good job!
aprillily
aprillily@livejournal.com
I did struggle reading it, though, because you skipped back and forth between past and present tense. You didn't say in your author's notes if you had anyone beta this for you, but I would suggest doing so. The story is good--I loved Pansy, and how Draco turned possessive, and how gentle they were together--but it just needs a bit of polishing. If you don't have someone to beta for you, I'd volunteer. Just let me know.
Overall, though, good job!
aprillily
aprillily@livejournal.com