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so sick and twisted, poor babies

Although he was raping her I found that beautiful! :)

draco is such a ditz in this!Lol. it sounds as though everytime he rapes her in the hallwyas, he thinks she's crying because they can never reveal their love or something lol. what a jackass..... good stroy thoguh, real good ;)

Wow a crazy Draco that is also in denial, Well done.

that was an interesting spin on things great writting, it was dark but you wrote it well good job! :)

i loved this story i think you should do another one of this story in hermione's point of vew

Wow, what a dark and disturbing story. You handled the content beautifully, which is quite a testament to your writing. You mananged to convey the extent of Draco's madness and his complete ignorance of it wonderfully. His inability to interpret Hermione's actions for what they were in such an ironically childish way gave him a perfectly smooth, sociopathic edge.

I can't quite see Hermione silently accepting that kind of twisted abuse, but in the realm of fan-fiction, you have an artistic license to do what you will with the characters inside of your story. You wanted something chilling and macabre, and you certainly succeeded in creating it. And what a heart-breaking conclusion!

Good work!

Wow! That was brilliant!
The ending was so sweet and sad!

Wow... that was so good. Draco gone a little too desperate... Poor Hermione. But awesomeness all the same. ^^

Good story. Very poetic. I almost didn't know what you were talking about but I like it. Keep going.