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for Shattered

by HexxKitten

person Ghinna
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellently written, well done!
person Veritas
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the Tav / Jason X over. LMAO
person Melissa Phillis
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, leaves you wanting more and more of it!

Can't wait for another Joanne!

Liss xx
person Mona Lisa
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter2
This is Lucius all over, perfectly written in character. Nice idea with the back to blooming charmed flowers. I love his minute planned encounter with the old woman. And you did a wonderful job describing how he changed from his fake kindness to his real intentions.

Chapter 3
Tee hee, very nice to see Lucius meeting with a rebuff for a change. Gets him just in the right mood for revenge in every respect. Great!

Chapter 4
OMG what a great chapter. I can
person Vermillion Rhodes
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's another story by my favorite author! When's the next chapter, Hexxy?
person Veritas
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing start, Hexx.