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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was amazing. Disjointed, but it flowed so well just the same. I had no trouble following it at all. And Hermione's satisfaction that she was going to get revenge at the end was perfect. Well done.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That certainly was...dark. Very well-written. Hermione was definitely frightening, and you've done a good job with Sirius' point of view. At first, when I read 'consoling Mrs. Tonks' I thought Lucius had killed Remus. And I spazzed. But then I realized that didn't make any sense, because it would be Mrs. Lupin, or even Ms. Tonks if she kept her surname. Anyway, yeah, I felt like an ass.
...Good stuff!
...Good stuff!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, that's good. Very very good. *nods* If you get any more, just give us a shout.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I've been reading a lot of Lucius/Hermione stories, and I've read some vampire fics, with Hermione being the vamp. This one is very well written. She seems to be the best person to pull off being a vampire.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please! please! write more. i'm loving vamp hermione.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was exceptional. Bravo
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It starts out like this dreadfully sad letter, then takes a turn into story... a very human story with real feelings and people who could be as real as anyone who ever lived. Wonderfully crafted, and I thank you. --Melody
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lauren.....I love it. Wonderful work. There were only a couple places that seemed a bit jumpy to me but overall it was wonderful. One complaint though.....no smut!!!! Come on girl lets get some action going on. :D