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Well I like your style so no need to apologize. Just please update soon!! I really want to know why Harry got Draco the collar and what does it do! So please update soon!!
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~

Mmm... Finally! Some action! *grin* I liked that you switched from one's POV to the others, It made it more interesting. Yummi chapters!! More Please! ASAP!!

Yes these scene breaks are irritating at best and look to me they could easily be solved by the affamed paragraph. Stay true to your story and dont worry about the reviews unless they have constuctive suggestions in the improvement of your story. Use your paragraph to flow from the thoughts that you just expressed to show one thought moving on to another. The scene break prevents this from happening. Looking at how another author does this can sometimes be helpful. Writing down on a piece of paper what you want to happen in a chapter is a good way to help your story flow together and yet keep from straying to far away from your original theme. Remember to make clear what your characters are thinking and why they do what they do and how they feel about what is happening around them. The doctor.

I love yhis story!

A nusery? What manor are they in? Godric's Hollow? Or did he buy someone else's house or build new? Inquiring minds want to know. =o)

Thanks for updating!

Draco seems an OK guy and Harry definetly has problems... I worry about what he will do to Draco. Is that necklace a slave one? He will hurt Draco so bad...

Does he go in? Did Harry have a child? Need chapter 14! Wanna know more!

Wonderful, as expected. ^-^ I haven't commented lately, kinda busy but I'm glad I hurried along and caught up.lol Waiting for the next update!

ah! what a great chapter! (I know I say that alot, but they really are)
loved the "taboo room" and the way draco is reacting to it. he nearly seames in chock :-)
I've got no problem with you playing around a bit with the length of the chapters. As long as your happy at the end of the day :-)

Interesting story, sort of twitsted Harry....feels like there is more going on here than meets the eye. Is this after the downfall of Voldie? I'm guessing they must be at Godric's Hollow. Abandoned nursery (hint,hint). Anyway, update soon, please.