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for Earning a Name

by Talin

person Answers
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry if i offned you but i read this story to read about Harry and Draco not Blaise, so i've been skipping the parts where it centres around Blaise & Harry/blaise, so the chapters have been very short. I'll keep doing this and i can only hope that he'll be written out or something as the story goes on. If this is going to be a very permanent thing, perhaps you should have mentioned it in the summary?
person bayb43
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ugh...I know exactly how you feel about the deleting and saving wrong...I can't tell you how many times I've lost things like that! I absolutely love your story, by the way. Please keep writing:)
person avihenda
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, I have to ask, have you read my fic feelings and trust? This chapter (disclamer included) so reminds me of my never ending "ron arc" as I've started to call it. Don't worry about the bondage not being 100%. I don't think anyone is actually testing it out on their dolls at home to see what you meen. Well, I hope not, coz my description of japanese bondage was clueless at best...
As usuall loved the chapter, even if not much really happened, it adds to the momentum that I'm hopeing for a climax (pun not intended) to, in a couple of chapters :-)
I hope youre setled in at uni. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully some draco action :-)
person avihenda
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, and my comment before, dose not meen I think you stole my bondage scen (not much to steal anyway). I just found it funny how much they reminded of eachother. I've been walking around with my foot in my mouth for days, I swear! -_-'
person Sheree
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the stuff with Harry and Draco but this Blaise crap is boring. I don't even know why he keeps showing up. Can we have more H/D and less H/B?
person Kara Y.
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapte but AHHHHH! your killing me!!! I want to know dracos reaction to the collar!!! *sigh* but i can wait. ^-^ update soon!
person bananagirl
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I wish Blaise *had* given their game away in front of Draco, that way Draco would know what he was in for with Harry :D
person venus
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, i really like this story. i'm a little horny right now darnit... anyway, update asap!!! you've got another fan lol
person Kara Y.
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! finally an update! *claps* longer then the last chapter AND kinky, lovely just lovely. Till your next update.
person Answers
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I HATE Blaise. How can harry go sleep with someone else, when he has a gorgeous innocent draco? Doesn't make sense! I was wondering if your goign to make your chapters longer, i mean this one was the length of like 3 paragraphs. If youd wait a week before posting, and combine like 3 of the little chapters it would be funner to read. I say this because you leave chapter hanging at a crucial point nearly every time, and it only serves to annoy the readers insteaad of work as a cliff hanger. By the way did i mention i hate Blaise..?