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for Earning a Name

by Talin

person bananagirl
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you show us here that it's not just the circumstances he's in - Draco really *is* submissive in bed by nature. It's obvious from the way he feels vulnerable afterwards and asks Harry to stay, from the fact that he didn't think to ask to be unbound, from a bunch of other little details.

There's something I'm wondering about. It makes sense for Harry to think of Draco as "the blonde" in the chapters from Harry's POV, since he has yet to decide what name to give him, but why does Draco think of his master as "the brunette" and "the voice" in chapter 9? Is he making the transition from "Potter" to Harry or Master?
person avihenda
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, I don't know about sick and terrible but brilliant is definitly a word for it. manipulent and a bit evil also comes to mind. :-)

allways a pleasure to read you chapters :-)
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, if you mean sickeningly sexy and ifeelsoterriblebecauseitmakesmesowet/hardbecausethisissodevilishlytaboo then yes. AND YES BRILLIANT! Seeing Harry treat Draco like that is so sexy. I wish he'd have teased him more though. This last chapter was really fucking hot.
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 11! Draco asked him to stay? I'm stunned.
person Kara Y.
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Bondage! Do go on.
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 please! Looks like Harry is getting exactly what he wants. Hmm.
person avihenda
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
merry xmas :-)
great chapter :-)
like the binding of hands ^_^
hope you write more soon! I allways end up looking for a new chapter every morning when I wake up lol you've gotten me
person Demon
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I now have a major drooling problem because of the sheer hotness of this! I love this it is absolutly amazing and I hope to see a new chapter soon ^-^
person Fefs
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you know you are killing us. Harry is teasing me more then Draco!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!
person alex
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goddammit u fricken suck....why did u stop?