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for Earning a Name

by Talin

person Mia
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I understand the not set length but honestly we didn't get hardly any info in that one, you either need to fit more plot in your chapters or add two chapter together, I'm not sure but it is frustrating and harder to get into the story when the chapters are that short. just my opinion though, it's your story
person DarkerImage
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
congrats! I like your story, and update soon....you know, the usual. Happy New Year!
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 please! I'm curious as well!
person avihenda
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! very short :-( but cute and made me wonder alot about the next chapter. can't wait :-)

schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yup, super short, but keep them that way: they keep us drooling!!! XD
person ladyX
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what was this 3 chapters?...all sex...delightful..i cannot wait for more of this! you are truly brilliant! you are magnificant at this!!
person avihenda
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok I just realised something... I'm probably stupid that I missed it...
"Still, the blonde was finally asking things... and was it not one of those stepping stones; making him willing to do things for the blonde he didn
person Tyggs
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am completely addicted to this fic. You picked my favorite theme and did an amazing job with it. Goddess I don't know if I'd rather have the Master here or the slave. Yummy.
person :D
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DRACO IS A PET!!! :D

you have to make the chapter longer!!!...
UPDAAAAATE!!!
Keep up the good work! :D:D:D
person Miss Missed
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brilliant...great work...keep it up