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for Dark Marks and Manicotti

by faithmisplaced

person fnw
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. ^__^
This demands a sequel. Perhaps after the baby is born and Ron gets a good shot to the head?
person Rena
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, if Harry and Draco let such a bit of trash as Ron to use them as a doormats, they deserved everything that had happened with them. Maybe, the perspective of trying to survive on the streets will clear their brains and they will took their lives back in their own hands and put Ron on his place.
person Yhitzak
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY well done, my friend! It's so rare to find a good story in this fandom, anymore, let alone one with a plot. Besides that, it's rare to find a one-shot that can truly stand alone. This was sweet, intelligent, and your structure DIDN'T make it painful (in any way) to read. Kudos to you!
person Alexa
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. And I want a sequel so bad! Please?
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh continue! Do they find safe shelter? Does the wizarding world realize their mistake? Before it's too late? What happens next?