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for The Foundation

by Newshound61

person Akito
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's so realistic and the characterization is great! The ending to the last chapter was so sad, though. How can Harry and Draco resolve such a large problem as having different goals in life? Maybe Harry would be really impressed with what a great father Draco was if he could observe him with his daughter on one of the weekends she's staying at his house. He might realize then that settling down is a good idea. But still, at the same time, it's not bad to have an adventure every once in a while. Why don't they compromise? Please let there be a happy ending and please update soon!
person doesitmatter
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHH i love it update soonnn!!!
person Alison
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't they be friend and foundation building by day and sex-craved lunatics by night? Have the best of both worlds?

hee hee

Great chapter! Update soon please. =o)
person thrnbrooke
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn! That smarts! Need chapter 12! I'm thinking this isn't going to happen. So far I don't see a happy ending to this. Hope I'm wrong.
person Amessis
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry was such an ass there! He's the one acting like a child! Draco is trying to have an actual relationship, and Harry only seems to want sex from him- I'd feel used if I were Draco. Harry's the one who needs to grow up here.
person hp_strangelove
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awe - how sweet - they make a good match...I'd sure like to see Draco have an opportunity to "educate" Harry soon tho :-)
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 11! Draco got a bit mad there but Harry defused it quite perfectly! Now they are on to date number two. How will that go?
person Alison
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What??? No kiss goodbye? Ugh! That wasn't very nice!

But it was a great chapter. =o) Update soon please. =o)
person StrangeLove
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been checking for updates everyday and got lucky today! I can hardly wait until they finally get together to do it "right" this time!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't like Draco's views on sex. There's a lot more to it. Need chapter 10! Will Harry go on the date? Will he want more?