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for You made me...

by Bebedora

person Elaine
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay......that was a bit more angsty than I've read in a long time, but I'm not saying that's bad. I like the story so far. So much I can't wait for the next part. I have to know before I continue to read this however, you do intend for Harry to have a happily ever after and all that rot right? I read a fic that was leading into him getting recovered and all that and then Draco(or lucious i dont remember ^_^) killed him. I'm very open minded. I like angst along the way to a happily ever after because when isn't there? Please update soon. I love your writing.

~Elaine
person witchinghour
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW.....Incredible. Some grammar issues, things that could have been worded better, but overall I truly enjoyed it, and hope very much that you continue.
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow....
person Redemption
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I've read a lot of broken!Harry stories, but this has an amazing start. Keep writting, I'll definately be reading.
person Angel
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I have read abused!Harry fics before but they just skip all of this and then Snape comes to the rescue and in two weeks they live happily ever after. This is nothing like that right now.. this is... is amazing and I do hope you (like me) like a canon Snape (well besides the fact that he wants to shag Harry *ahem*) because this seems like the start of a beautiful friendship (me and the novell that is *smile*)
person Ari
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh sad! I hope you update soon. It seems promising.
person myniephoenix
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.... that's all i can say... wow..
person hp_reader
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty intense - I could just about feel how much it hurt as I read - hope there is an update soon.