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Please, Please, Please Update!
I need to know what happens!!!!

interesting i like to see where it goes

Oh don't you just hate "get a beta now"-people when you already said your sorry about it? Well I know I do. I agree with you, don't they like it then don't read.

I for myself don't care about grammar or spelling if the story is good, and this one is. This could be because I'm not american or english and therefore suck at it myself but honstly! If people can't handle some misspellings and grammar mistakes they shouldn't be reading fanfiction at all... I'm going to get in a lot of troubble for saying it but hey it's my opinion.

Now on to the story. I really like your long answer to my review. It makes me feel special ;) and it makes me wanna review even more. I liked this even if I'm not fond of "side"-stories and I could cera less about Lucius feelings when poor Harry ios surreing and I want Snape there buggering him and loving and... *blush* ehm... well you know what I'm talking about... but my guess is you have a plan behind all of this so I will put my seatbelt on and enjoy the ride.

I like the lullaby, really nice. I also like the fact that you will keep Snape as Snape (because Snape do have a soft side in the books too in my opinion! *bites everyone who don't agree* ;P )

Hmm what more did I want to say? I'm not going to curse you, if I did how will I get my story? I am thinking about kidnapping you, shackle you to my bed and make you write more every single day... but (un)fortunatly I'm not that cruel. I like Voldemorts little speach even if I'm not a huge fan of letting the man get to much attention *growls at Voldie* I like how you made Hermione. But shouldn't she be more devestated that she thinks Harry is pushing himself off the deep end?

And to the most pressing point... the sex! I need sex, and lots of it ;) gimme gimme gimme! *lol*

/your devoted fan, Angel

could cera less about Lucius feelings when poor Harry ios surreing and I want Snape

this should ofcourse say:

could care less about Lucius feelings when poor Harry is hurting and I want Snape


Like I said, my spelling is horrid too, and my keyboard is always messing with me. Stupid keyboard! ;)

This could be a great story if you get a Beta (your word usage is atrocious!) and you stop over-explaining things. Just get on with it!!

I really like this story and I can't wait to read more. I really want Harry to get his revenge; I really want to kill Dursley (Vernon) right now. Keep up the really good work and please update soon.

Umm, your not gona kill harry,Are you? 'coz that would Kinda end the Fic premuturely.

January? But that's to long! I want a nother chapter now! yes I know... don't push and stuff but this is good. Really good. And I can't pinpoint something I like the most because I like it all. It's so full of Angst I'm nearly ripping my heart out. But Hedwig?? Oh no... that is so sad!

Sense your up for suggestions I can just give you hints on what I don't like in a story. Snape can not be fluffy (and I think your picture of him was great. Like the coffie thing even if I picture him more of a tea person...) and I need more angst. I would have Harry surviving because of his magic... like when he blew up his aunt... something that just happens.

I just hope I get an update sooooooon, and you really do have a fan here!
*hugs*

Dang!! Some start you have there...
Hope you are able to update again before long... looking forward to seeing where you are going to go with it

Oh! That was so confusing, but sad. You have to keep updating, hopefully sooner than last time.